Saturday, 8 October 2011

So I haven't had any comments on my Professional profile, so I have taking the liberty of looking at others blogs  and their comments and putting some of the things that I have learnt from them, into my Blog.

Let me know what you think!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SnBCExEk4oR-PiG7EMs5I7_A_S7yD7f-Um6AL8_KYX8/edit?hl=en_US

Thanks

3 comments:

  1. Hi Lisa, (do you prefer Lisa/Elise?)

    Just had a go at looking at your Profile - think it's set to Private on Google Docs. Can you make it available to view for anyone with the link? (click Share) Then we should all be able to look! Best of luck - speak soon!

    Aïcha

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  2. Hey

    Thanks Aicha! now I understand why I haven't been getting any comments! Technology is beyond me sometimes! I kind of prefer Elise now, especially when in this Industry, no one knows my name is Lisa any more

    Thank you

    Elise

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  3. Hi Lisa
    Your profile reads well. May I suggest you take out any negative comment such as the numerous job refusals. Unfortunately it is very tough in any industry today to secure a job, so you could mention that you welcome further opportunities for training and you intend to/or are continuing developing performance and presenting skills. This way you open up your chances of working with other presenters. Once you get your foot in the door, you can start following your intended direction. Finally, instruct people to go directly to your Youtube video link, I would take out the words 'if you wish', you've put in a lot of time and effort in preparing the reels. I just wanted to help you tweak a couple of sentences. Wishing you the very best of luck. Corinda

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